[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2010 07:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I liked this a lot. A different take on things and definitely a tantalizing ending.
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Date: Aug 17, 2009 03:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good idea. The yellow lights sound like something Claudia would do, too. :)
Author's Response: I think Claudia is very good at figuring out how to avoid security problems although Anita and the others probably tend to create all new problems. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: Aug 09, 2009 02:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this quite a bit, and my compliments for thinking through the pomme lesson so thoroughly. Are you planning to write more of this?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. There is a sequel in the works that follows one of the new recruits but it's still a long way from being done.
Date: Jul 27, 2009 03:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Your story works wonderfully! The idea of needing instruction is extremely clever. You did a great job laying out the do's and don'ts! I enjoyed every aspect. Nathaniel's dejection at the end is delightfully bittersweet.
Author's Response: Thanks for the glowing review. It was sad for Nate but I'm a sucker for one-sided/unrequited love so I wanted to make the kiss work without it leading to anything else. Although, Nate's pretty patient about getting what he wants so Jason better watch out;)
Date: Jul 27, 2009 02:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this story, I thought it covered all the basic points of being a pomme well and the tension between Nate and Jason was well done. And to answer your question, the slash did work ;)
Author's Response: Thanks. I kept trying to think of everything that would be encompassed in their positions as pomme-de-sangs and I came up with quite a few. I'm glad the slash worked.
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2009 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Cool premise...I love the idea of Jason in the teaching position! LOL...I'm sure there are quite a few other positions Jason would be qualified for!
Author's Response: I think Jason would make a good teacher for certain subjects. He's definitely not shy about speaking in front of others. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2009 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story has so many possibilities - for the pommes and Jason and Nate. Interesting pairing. Great start. I hope to read more soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks. This is just a one-shot but I am working on a longer story that in part follows one of the new recruits from this story but it's still a long way away from being posted.